Poem 1
strong, brave, a war veteran
this is what this candle is.
he had many achievements under his belt
Over the years though he weakened
the light above his head dimmed
till one day you could barely see it
the candles family knew that his time was coming to an end
when one day no one saw his light
with tearful eyes the family buried the candle in the grave yard of all candles
"the trash can"
they threw matches and lighters while buring him.
even after his death no one forgot about the candle
he had great candles and candles that he left behind.
all the candles miss him dearly but they couldnt bring him back
with sad eyes they healed their wax hearts
until the day they didnt cry
then finally did their light shine once more.
Revision: I decided to do stanzas in the next poem because it needed to be broken apart.
Poem 2
strong, brave, a war veteran
this is what this candle is
he had many achievements under his belt.
over the years though he weakened
the light above his head dimmed
till one day you could barely see it
the candle's family knew,
his time was coming to an end.
one day no one saw his light
with tearful eyes the family buried
the candle in the graveyard,
of all candles
"the trash can"
they threw matches and lighters were buried with him
even after his death no one forgot about the candle
he had great candles and candles he left behind
all the candles miss him dearly
but they couldn't bring him back
with sad eyes they healed their wax hearts
until the day they didnt cry
and then finally did their light shine.
revision: i decided to change some of the words to make it sound better
poem 3
strong, brave, a war hero
this is what the candle is
awards started piling up
years passed by,
his light that once shined bright, now barely visable
the candle's family knew,
his time was coming to an end.
one day his light disappeared
with tearful eyes, the family buried him,
the grave yard of all candles, "the trash can"
they buried him with lighters and matches.
things that he absolutely adored.
after the death,
no one forgot about the candle
he had great candles and candles
sadly left behind
all the candles miss him dearly,
but they couldn't bring him back
their wax hearts healed overtime
until the day they didn't cry
finally their light shined brighter than ever.
revision: i decided to make the poem more vague so it wouldnt be about one particular thing.
Poem 4
the candle
full of light and happiness
deep wounds healed
years passed by,
growing smaller every year
light dulled
growing small
the candle was barely visible
limited days left
one day darkness encased him
candles left behind
life must go on
a new candle
fresh wax, tall ever
ready for life to begin
no one ever forgot
the candle though.
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